Tuesday, 3 December 2013

Initial mini draft (CM)




A practice with my first shots taken and a soundtrack I may possibly use, personally found it (the music) quite fitting with a dreary atmosphere yet some structural beat.

I will definitely be keeping the Osseoperception introduction, it makes an intriguing hook to the video and fits in well with the small set of starter credits, cutting to a strange silence before the video begins. The phenomenon of osseoperception fits in amazingly well with the theme of mis-treated mannequins with missing limbs - a great find, just what I was looking for! Eerie, strange, links in well and it connects us (and the story) to the characters. 

The use of Ken-Burns is still something to work on. After asking my tutor she suggested not to use it at all, so I shall likely take most of them away. But I still feel some very subtle use of it may help smooth down the cross-dissolving process between images. 

I also need to work on tightening up the cuts between images, making sure they definitely cross over to the soundtrack.

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